EDITING CHECKLIST





PREP (Preposition) Last week of April, he finally arrived Montreal. She likes to listen rock music. So she never searches Beethoven on the Internet.





On the last week of April, he finally arrived at Montreal. She likes to listen to rock music. So she has never searched Beethoven on the Internet.





CS (Comma Splice)Tom went to the store, although she was tired, Sue went with him, they took a bus there.





Tom went to the store. Although she was tired, Sue went with him. they took a bus there.


FRAG (Fragment)When they opened the door. It was raining.Even though we were hungry.



It was raining when they opened the door even though we were hungry.







RUN-ON SENTENCE When they opened the door it was raining even though we were hungry we decided not to go to McDonalds.

When they opened the door it was raining . Even though we were hungry , we didn't decide to go to McDonalds.


TENSEYesterday we went to the mall and I feel very tired after two hours.Tom was fall down last week. He breaking his leg.

Yesterday we went to the mall and I felt very tired after two hours. Tom fell down last week.He broke his leg.

PERIODS/COMMAS/CAPS/SPACESTom went to the no frills . Although she was tired ,Sue went with him.They took a bus there. When they arrived,the mall was closing .



Tom went to the Nofrills. Although she was tired, Sue went with him. They took a bus there,when they arrived the mall was closing.

PROPER NOUNSAfter attending Micro Skill link, Pushpa moved to niagra fall and worked at basic food and McDonald.

After attending the Microskill link, Pushpa moved to the Niagra fall and worked at the Basic food and McDonald.

SPELLINGSutdents msut leanr hwo two spelr correctley, especialy sins the hav spelcheck no they're compter.

Students must learn how to spell correctly, especially they check the spelling on their computer.

Using the telephone

Last week I was so busy, I invinted my friend to Toronto from Australia.He came my house himself, because my car breaked.In the day that there was first snow inToronto,the traffic was terrible.I drave myself to 401 highway.There were a lot of water on the ground.When I passed it ,my car was watered and stopped on the highway. I couldn't started the engine.I was waiting for 2 hours in my car after I called CAA to help me taking away my car and fixed it.Next day I drave him to look around Toronto.I told him a lot of information about Canada.I think Canada is better than Australia.Because stuff and house in Canada are cheaper than Australia.Living in Canada is more convenience than Australia.I teased my friend that Australia he lives look like large island.I asked him to immigrate to Canada.He thinks moving to Canada,but he said he love Australia also.He wished himself luck.On the weekend,my friend left Canada to Australia.He said he had good time in Canada.I miss him,I am looking forward to meet him again.