Monday, March 22, 2010

Have Fun in March Break

Last week was March Break. I had a lot of fun with my family. On Monday, we went to watch the movie called Alice In Wonderland. The movie is in 3D, so we wore special glasses to watch it. I had a good seat, but I couldn't enjoy it. A young man was sitting behind me. He was shaking my seat with his foot. I turned around to tell him to stop doing it. He smiled at me and didn't do it again. I could enjoy watching the movie. It was beautiful. I wonder how they did it by computer. I asked my daughter. Because she has good computer skills. She didn't care about my question. "It is common sense," she said. I thought I should increase my knowledge.

Monday, January 18, 2010

Video 3'00-4'00(tr.im/KMZi)

Teacher: Welcome to the parent teacher interviews. I just wanted to say that I'm very glad that you can make it here this evening. Now Richard is a very strong student. You must be encouraging him quite a bit at home.

Father: Thank you very much.

Teacher: Just to give you an idea of what he's been doing. Here is an example of some of his earlier work and if you take a look at what we has been writing just recently. You can see that he's progressed quite reasonable amount. Now you can see these sentences are a fair bit longer, his spelling and grammar are much improved too.

Mother: In China, Richard loved to write stories. Yeah.

Teacher: It's funny you mention that, he's actually first came here. I asked him to write something in his first language.

Mother: He put some English words there, that's interesting.

Teacher: That's good. You know what I mean. He put in what he knew and everything else that he didn't, he worked on it.

(The teacher will tell you about your child's progress and explain how you can help at home.)

Mother: We're happy to hear that, but we have a consent about the homework.

Teacher: Oh, okay.

Mother: Uh, compare back in China, we didn't see Richard bring home a lot homework.

Teacher: Right, that is understandable.

Monday, January 4, 2010

Celebrate 2010

We had two weeks vacation from Dec.19 2009 to Jan.4 2010.During that time,I had a very good time.I enjoyed my holiday.I went to shop at outline mall.I played card with my friend.I traveled to Niagara Falls with my family.In the end of 2009,My friend invinted us to have dinner at Jepanese resterant and celebreted the new year of 2010.After dinner,the new year of 2010 came,when we were singing a song:"I love my country". We huged and shaked hand each other.We prayed that the world will be peace and our life will be better and better.

Wednesday, December 16, 2009

EDITING CHECKLIST





PREP (Preposition) Last week of April, he finally arrived Montreal. She likes to listen rock music. So she never searches Beethoven on the Internet.





On the last week of April, he finally arrived at Montreal. She likes to listen to rock music. So she has never searched Beethoven on the Internet.





CS (Comma Splice)Tom went to the store, although she was tired, Sue went with him, they took a bus there.





Tom went to the store. Although she was tired, Sue went with him. they took a bus there.


FRAG (Fragment)When they opened the door. It was raining.Even though we were hungry.



It was raining when they opened the door even though we were hungry.







RUN-ON SENTENCE When they opened the door it was raining even though we were hungry we decided not to go to McDonalds.

When they opened the door it was raining . Even though we were hungry , we didn't decide to go to McDonalds.


TENSEYesterday we went to the mall and I feel very tired after two hours.Tom was fall down last week. He breaking his leg.

Yesterday we went to the mall and I felt very tired after two hours. Tom fell down last week.He broke his leg.




PERIODS/COMMAS/CAPS/SPACESTom went to the no frills . Although she was tired ,Sue went with him.They took a bus there. When they arrived,the mall was closing .



Tom went to the Nofrills. Although she was tired, Sue went with him. They took a bus there,when they arrived the mall was closing.

PROPER NOUNSAfter attending Micro Skill link, Pushpa moved to niagra fall and worked at basic food and McDonald.


After attending the Microskill link, Pushpa moved to the Niagra fall and worked at the Basic food and McDonald.




SPELLINGSutdents msut leanr hwo two spelr correctley, especialy sins the hav spelcheck no they're compter.

Students must learn how to spell correctly, especially they check the spelling on their computer.

Friday, November 27, 2009

Using the telephone

Last week I was so busy, I invinted my friend to Toronto from Australia.He came my house himself, because my car breaked.In the day that there was first snow inToronto,the traffic was terrible.I drave myself to 401 highway.There were a lot of water on the ground.When I passed it ,my car was watered and stopped on the highway. I couldn't started the engine.I was waiting for 2 hours in my car after I called CAA to help me taking away my car and fixed it.Next day I drave him to look around Toronto.I told him a lot of information about Canada.I think Canada is better than Australia.Because stuff and house in Canada are cheaper than Australia.Living in Canada is more convenience than Australia.I teased my friend that Australia he lives look like large island.I asked him to immigrate to Canada.He thinks moving to Canada,but he said he love Australia also.He wished himself luck.On the weekend,my friend left Canada to Australia.He said he had good time in Canada.I miss him,I am looking forward to meet him again.